Chicken poxI achieved to use a lead sentence good and grab the reader

I woke up in the morning excited with two nights to go till camp. When I went to change my top I saw a spot on my tummy and I said to my Mum what’s this spot Mum. My Mum said I don’t know I think it might be the Chicken pox but I don’t really know and she said just see how it goes by tomorrow. The next day I had a bit more spots I looked like a leopard. I just can’t wait till these spots go away.
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