I am learning to use speech marks correctly.

I was going further and further back. I thought it would never end! Then I looked down. I could see all the others. I put one foot off and onto the flat cliff face... then another. I slowly let out some more rope. Then I slipped! My foot just landed on another rock! My heart was pounding. I could hear one of the instructors ask me if I was okay. I looked up. I could see the next person coming.**.

I think that I used punctation very well in my story.

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