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How the octupos lost an arm
How the octupos lost an arm

the pool
the pool

He was cruzing along the sea and then suddenly he lost an arm then he went to his friends house and then they both went to the hospital.


My friend is rimu

I have huge legs

and thick skin

I have long arms

Which birds hang onto

My bones are really thin

My legs are really enormous

And help me balance

My blood is really juicy

I think I have done well using description in my writing