cooltext433057286.pngs&l.png Please leave me feed back .My learning intentions is using comas and planning properly.
Permanently not suitable,
Obviously, it’s not okay,
Look at it, its terrible,
Littering is part of pollution,
Ultra-stupid,
Turtles die from it,
Obliging NOT!!!
Impossibly real,
Not so good to plants.
Heres my poem self portrait
LITTLE WONDERS!!! I chose this story because it was so exciting at the real time!
Me, sitting on a rock hard floor when suddenly this little kid, high, plonked
who seemed to me to be about three centimetres down beside me. She was expected (well I assumed she was
expected) to be sitting where all the other three centimetre kids were sitting. Now I’m not trying to be mean by saying the little kids were only three centimetres high but from where I was standing that’s what they seemed to be. So I’m sitting in two lines about to perform when I heard the first strum of the guitar and Brenas voice. I was mortified, more mortified than an old pig. But once I started to sing I said to myself “ this isn’t mortifying this is fun!! After that we sang
‘Every
Body Follow the three centimetre people all stood up but I wonder was it because the teachers told them to or did they just want to? After we sang we read to them and after we read to them we were finished and went back to school for another exciting hour!!!!!
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hi dclair_jess dclair_jess 1 40 Sep 15, 2009 by dclair_elise dclair_elise
cool poem dclair_alex dclair_alex 0 35 Sep 8, 2009 by dclair_alex dclair_alex
cool story dclair_alex dclair_alex 3 41 Sep 6, 2009 by dclair_elise dclair_elise
feedback dclair_jacob dclair_jacob 1 35 Aug 12, 2009 by dclair_elise dclair_elise
Nayland Primary buddy kelliemc kelliemc 0 41 Aug 12, 2009 by kelliemc kelliemc
little people dclair_autumn dclair_autumn 0 35 Aug 3, 2009 by dclair_autumn dclair_autumn
little wonders dclair_michelle dclair_michelle 0 37 Aug 3, 2009 by dclair_michelle dclair_michelle
You are a published writer! clairbee clairbee 0 32 Jun 2, 2009 by clairbee clairbee


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