Christchurch I am learning to use good punctuation in my writing

I was lazing around and my Mum came in and said we’re going to Christchurch so we did in two days. When we got there we decided to go to the Mall.

In the Mall I brought a PS2 game from EB games called Ratchet and Clank size matters after that we went back to our motel. At the motel I played in the pool, jumping pillow and the games room.

Then I went back to my unit to watch television and relax. After the days had flown by it was nearly time to go home so my family and me had to. We stopped at cookie time and got some cookies and biscuits and carried on home.
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